“I can't be with you unless you're
absolutely certain!” She cries out through her tears.
“I am certain! I've told you that a
thousand times tonight alone! You just won't believe me...” He
replies, his head dropping in defeat with the realization that she
could never be convinced.
“I'm sorry...” She sobs. “I
can't do this anymore.”
“Okay.” He answers softly,
stopping himself from sobbing. “I'm sorry. I'll go.”
In one night came the end of an era.
The two of them had been together for almost four years. They had
plans together, a future filled with coffee dates and late nights.
They were looking for an apartment together when he was struck with a
wave of doubt. Suddenly he wasn't certain he still loved her, and
subsequently doubted whether he should move in with her. So he found
ways to delay it, at least until he figured it all out.
This went on for months before one of
her friends suggested to her that he might be stalling it on purpose.
This idea developed in her mind until one day she could be pregnant
with it no longer, and birthed it into their relationship. There was
nothing he could say or do to distract her from the question and was
soon forced to make a choice – to lie or to come clean. He chose
the honourable route, the one that led to the end, to goodbye.
Three months after, another sleepless
night prompts them to talk. It's 3 am and the two of them are alone
in their beds, their laptops open beside them. She wants to talk on
the phone – to hear his voice again – but is too afraid to ask.
He does too, but is afraid he won't be able to say what he wants,
that he'll give into the beauty of her singing voice. So instead they
chat on Skype.
“How've you been?” He asks.
“Alright. You?”
“Been better.”
She's typing something and he waits
with anxious anticipation. What he wants to see is exactly what he
doesn't want to see.
“I miss you.” Blunt. Brave.
Honest.
He considers lying.
“I miss you too.” Honest but
hesitant.
Neither of them say anything, waiting,
hoping, for the other to say something. It's like they're confessing
their love for the first time, holding it back praying the other will
say it first, terrified of risking it all. But eventually one of them
has to fold.
“Do you still love me?” She asks.
He starts typing, writing a long
paragraph telling her everything – how he had always loved her, how
he would always love her, how much he wanted her back. He writes how
the moment he told her of his doubts, they disappeared, how the past
three months were spent wishing he had never been so stupid. He stops
and reads it over. He deletes it and replaces his confession with a
lie.
“No. I'm sorry... Goodbye.”
-Zero
Truth may lie within yourself, but the fact of not sharing this truth with others makes you someone dishonest.
ReplyDeleteThe first lie in this short story begins with its title. The author does not lie to protect someone, but to protect himself (and his wounded feelings).
The second lie lies with regards to the intention of this short story. In fact, beginning with a comment leads the reader to a distorted interpretation of what truly happened in this story-telling. To lead to think that the woman is the main cause of your suffering seems to be be intending to make you look good. The Truth does not lie in honesty, but in Love. This also means that the author's mixed emotions are conflicting. For example, how could he be honest (about himself) while at the same time being hesitant? That makes little sense. Pieces are missing on the overall portrait. It is not a thorough look into the deptness of the characters.
An interesting interpretation, I must say. The simplicity and shortness of the story lends itself to a variety of interpretations, depending on who is reading it. Although I would be careful to remind that it is a work of fiction and has no connection to any real events.
DeleteThank you for your interesting comment.